This is our third draft of our music video, when we completed this we had to get it peer assessed by some other students. Their feedback is summerized below.

Peer Review Pros and Cons Summerized

Pros:

• We had a good setting for our shoot.
• the opening shot is creative and unique
• the bus stop shot is a good tracking shot
• good range of angles and different shots
• authentic performance
• the narrative is clear

Cons

• Fill black slates, narrative needs conclusion
• lip syncing could be better
• variation in MES
• dont really need the sot of the xbox
• some of the shots were quite shaky, try fixing it in post or re shooting them