This is feedback for our Draft 2.

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• Group together shots. (e.g bus shots, bedroom shots)
• Introduce Brandon ealier
• Sort out continuity of Ben wearing galsses and then not.
• Sort out continuity of the different outfits in bus stop shots.

We need to rearrage the develpoment of the story/narrative elements. We need to look for clips that will create more continuity wityh ben and his glasses and we need to rearrage the bus stop part to make it connect with the original concept more.