Above is Draft 3 of our music video having worked on some improvements…
- During the editing process i worked on changing the colour pallet of the shots from the white studio as some of the feedback from the last draft sowed that these shots were not as interesting as they could be.
- I also added some more shots of the spaceman narrative added a different frame speed to them to act more like flash backs and more nostalgic, i also added in some different shots of the performance as well to make it slightly more interesting.
Some comments from peers…
- One peer mentioned that adding borders may look interesting
- A few said that they really liked how the colours of the toys stood out to them
- Lip syncing is slightly off in some shots
- Add more interseting narrative as it is bland
Targets for improvement…
- Add more edit to the beat and pace
- Different shots in another location
- More FX