Targets for development? What’s new and what’s next?

My targets set by my peers are;

Will said,

• He wanted some patterns on the background at the top on the left page.
• He would like the paragraphs to be the same length.

Mrs Cobb’s targets,

• Get rid of hyphens
• Choose a sons serif font
•  Paragraph the article
• Break it up with quotes or photos
• Drop capital – needs changing.
• No page number
• No date.

My targets

• Complete listed above
• Pick final story and photo
• Adjust story
• Cut photo
• Fix paragraphs
• Fix paragraph length

How will i do this?

I will look through some internet story’s and adapt the story around a photo i took of harry on my location tour. Then i will complete the rest of my targets.