Essay to Video Essay

Use this document to drop in sections from your script and screenshots from key scenes + time codes. You must observe the word count limit and based on your own speech speed test you may need to amend this down.

THE MAXIMUM DURATION IS 10 MINUTES. THE EXAMINER WILL STOP LISTENING AFTER THAT TIME!

A Great Video Essay

The Assessment Criteria

Lessons from the Screenplay

What is so great about it?
  • Allows the movie to ‘talk’.
  • Treats each movie in the same way.
    • Is structure to allow comparison
  • Using captions to emphasis key ideas.
    • Reuses those captions in order clarify
  • Is clearly spoken – about 2500 words for 15 minutes!
  • Uses film language

Previous Student’s Work

Preparing your comparative essay script

Drafting Your Script

By the beginning of next week (Monday 6th July) you must have completed a first draft of your script. This will probably be in the form of a rough essay – approx 1,000 words.

If you have followed the planning document I introduced last week, it should look something like this:

  • Introduction, justification and context
  • Comparative Point 1
    • Key Scene vs Key Scene
  • Comparative Point 2
    • Key Scene vs Key Scene
  • Comparative Point 3
    • Key Scene vs Key Scene
  • Comparative Point 4
    • Key Scene vs Key Scene
  • Conclusion

It is essential that this draft is completed in time, ready for some peer feedback.

The Read Through

You will all complete a read through of the script and get some peer feedback on the key assessment criteria.

The groups will be 3 strong and at the beginning you as author will allocate:

  • A timer and someone to count quotes & references to key scenes
  • Someone to listen out for structure and the degree to which you are answering your own question.
  • You will read your own script aloud

You should all use the assessment document to focus the feedback.

You should complete notes as you read through and gather your peers’ feedback at the end on how you could improve your work.

Visualising The Script (Independent Study)

Once you have received your peers’ feedback on the draft script you need to redraft based on that feedback and convert the essay into a script that will run alongside visuals from the two films.

You should consider the following: At a FAST talking speed (160 words per minute) you are limited to about 1,200 – 1,500 words! I used this website to calculate speech speed. You should test your reading speed by recording you reading out a 200 word section of your essay on your phone, find out your talking speed (remember audibility and clarity are assessment criteria) 

Use this document to drop in sections from your script and screenshots from key scenes + time codes. You must observe the word count limit and based on your own speech speed test you may need to amend this down.

THE MAXIMUM DURATION IS 10 MINUTES. THE EXAMINER WILL STOP LISTENING AFTER THAT TIME!

Planning & Structuring The Comparative Study

Your Research Project

Before we start scripting the essay we need to develop a structure that allows you to illustrate your research, understanding of the whole films, their context and how these big ideas and revealed in the cinematic style (micro).

A Recap

In Brief…

What have you learnt from your research?
  • Genre & Style
  • Your Film Movement
  • Your Film Theory
How does this learning apply to your 2 films (macro):
  • Representation of character, places and events
  • Use or challenge of generic conventions
  • Use of motifs to emphasis themes.
  • Narrative, journey & themes
  • Significance in terms of a ‘new’ style of film making
  • Directorial signature style
How you link these big ideas (context and research) in the films’ micro:
  • Screenplay (lines of dialogue and structure)
  • Recurring Motifs
  • Production Design of Mise-en-Scene
  • Directing (blocking, characterisation, intention and style)
  • Cinematography (lighting, framing, movement & composition)
  • Editing (rhythm, style, pace, positioning…)
  • Sound (diegetic and non diegetic)
Planning Part 1

Take a copy and complete this structure document.

The more specific you can be the better. So include quotes, key scenes, characters, themes, micro examples

Structuring The Comparative Essay

An IB Film  essay is multilayered (like an onion). Here is a graphic, which tries to explain those layers:

1) The inner most layer must have as it’s focus the micro features of the sequence.

2) The middle layer is on the macro features of the film.

  • In this case genre & representation
So, for example:
  • How do the characters, setting & iconography fit (or not) into the vampire horror genre?
  • How is your scenes significant in the representation of Orlok or Eli & to what degree do their characters redefine the ideology surrounding vampires?

3) The last layer is the context layer:

  • German Expressionism
  • Spanish Flu
  • Mistrust of the outsider (aristocrat or immigrant)

How are those references evident in the scene and what is the meaning is attached to those contextual references that deepens our understanding of the film?