Below is my Draft 4 Music Video 

What we have changed:

  • More punch bag shots with horizontal flips
  • Added more colour through performance clips
  • Made sure all narrative is in black and white
  • Check lip-syncing
  • Dissolve at the end

Comments from audience/peers:

Targets for improvement:

  • Look at the colours for performance
  • One clip had a van in the background
  • Change one of the lip-syncing clips

These changes were seen necessary by our audience so that the shots are the same colours throughout and that the focus is directly on our star not moving scenery behind. Furthermore having the stars lip-syncing even more on the beat this allows our star to fit the song as if he is actually singing it, which is more realistic to ours audience.