Here is our 2nd draft for our music video of ‘The Man Who Sold The World’. We included our shots from our Narrative shoot in Town.

Reflection

Positives

The jump-cuts synchronise well alongside the edit to the beat.

The use of some un-orthodox framing gives a sense of unease, reflecting the discomfort of the man with the bin, which can be seen as crucial to the grunge genre.

Targets for Improvement

Needs a conclusion for the narrative.

Lighting is too bright in some shots.

Drums need to be in sync with the song.