After having carefully considered the feedback we have received, we added more colour to our digipack and advert. The blues make it much more interesting and engaging as well as the drop shadows and highlighting we added. Below are our final print production products.
Author: amberrondel
Advert Draft 1 Feedback
We asked one of our peers to look at our first draft of our advert and give us some feedback which you can watch below.
She gave us some targets which include:
- Make the background gradient darker to match the digipack and the ideology.
- Add a drop shadow to the bottle and smashed pieces of glass to make it stand out from the background.
- Perhaps add some colour to add visual interest, we were think perhaps overlaying some blue on the bottle to make the blue glass on the digipack.
Advert Conventions
Before creating our own advertisement, we looked at the conventions of one. Below you can view my analysis of Lana Del Ray’s ‘Born To Die’ advert. It was really useful to consider what was included within an advert such as; album names, artist names and release dates, are all conventional features we plan to include.
Evaluation Question 4
How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?
After having created our music video and print products, I have considered all of the technologies that have helped me to communicate, collaborate and create in this process. Below you can view a Pinterest page that I’ve created that discusses all of these different technologies.
Follow Amber’s board Evaluation Question 4 on Pinterest.
Evaluation Question 3
What have you learned from your audience feedback?
We have created a presentation using the online software Voice Thread to examine how we have effectively reflected on feedback from our audience to improve our final products, which you can view below.
Evaluation Question 2
How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?
As a group we have looked at our music video and print products, and thought how these work together as successful media products. We created a video commenting on this which you can watch below.
Evaluation Question 1
‘In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?’
After having created my music video, digipack and advert, I have considered how these media products use and challenge the conventions of real media products. I have created some documents you can view below that explore the conventions comparing them to my own.
Advert – Draft 1
We have produced our first draft of our advert which you can see below. We are pleased with the geometric elements behind the text, I think this adds visual interest and works with thematic ideas within our music video, of the Chinese philosophy with Yin and Yang, the blacks and whites being very complementary together.
Digi-Pack Feedback
We asked our teacher, Mr Gregson, to give us some feedback on our Digi-pack which was very useful to get some ideas for improvement. Below you can listen to the feedback he gives;
From this we aim to improve our Digi-pack by;
- Perhaps changing the font on the title of the album, ‘Runnin”, as he believes it doesn’t come across as bold and significant as it should.
- On the back cover the track-list doesn’t stand out very much, and he was thinking that it would look better if we used a thicker stroke and maybe coloured it differently.
- He also commented on the backgrounds, the gradient on the front cover seems a little too dark. However, this was something we did purposefully, as the dark outside covers juxtapose the light inside covers, and works with the yin and yang ideologies we created within the music video.
- He also suggested colouring the girls dress pink, to match pink flower in the jar, which is something we will consider.
Advert – Digital Mock Up
After having drawn our ideas for our advert, we created a digital mock up which you can see below. I think this was particularly useful because we became more aware of the spacing and positioning. We decided we would have the bottle upright instead of tilted like on the digi-pack. however you can see the clear links with the digi-pack which is evidently vital in the marketing process.