Below is our draft 4 for our music video to the song Panic Room. We have improved upon the comments given my fellow media students in order to improve our video. Things we have changed include:

• Colour correcting all our clips to make them look brighter and less grainy
• Changed the order of the clips around 0:53 as they were a repeat of the previous clips
• Faded the shots at 3:17 to black to create a blinking montage

In order to evaluate our video we asked some fellow media studies students for their opinions on our music video. These are their comments below:

Our teacher also gave us some good feedback which has been detailed below:

Specific actions we will take to improve our final draft include:

• Colour correcting the shots of Min in the bunker
• Colour correct some shots of Millie
• More cuts in the performance shots to create more pace
• Increase shots in jump cut sequence at 3:36
• Extend the last clip of Millie running and fade to black
• Change one of the shots of her feet running in the footprints as our peers noticed that it had been used twice