Below is draft 3 of our music video to the song panic room by AU/RA. Specific changes that I have made include:

• Added the black/white Lumetri colour filters to all studio lip sync shots
• Changed the scale/position/rotation of the lip sync shots in the bunker
• Placed narrative over the lyrics “welcome to the” rather than performance shots
• Reversed/flipped some shots that we have used multiple times for example the hand dragging along the wall and 3:03
• Quickened the pace of edit by adding more clips to the montage coming up to the last chorus
• Deleted the clip of out actor looking out the wall as it was too dark and we were unable to get it light enough in postproduction

We asked some of our peers to give feedback and this feedback is listed below:

Amber:

James:

To improve our next draft we will:

• Correct some of the bunker lip-syncing shots as some have different filters on
• Reverse/flip the shot at 0:51 so it doesn’t look as if we have repeated the same shot
• Colour correct some shots by using Lumetri scopes so that they look more vibrant and clear
• Fade to black at the end where the music is very faint
• Create a title shot at the start
• Fade to black between each clip in the location montage at 3:17 to create a blinking effect