This is my draft article for my double page spread. Click on the image to see the PDF.
Here is my voice memo of my article:
From recording this I was able to listen for mistakes that I made including:
- A few words spelt incorrectly
- Punctuation mistakes- missing commas so the article didn’t flow as well as it could.
Targets my teacher set me are:
- Changing phrases to make the article more interesting
- Fixing grammar mistakes
- Changing the stars name to make it more interesting