This is the first draft of my double page spread. I am trying to embody the jazz genre in this double page spread for my magazine and I chose different features and conventions to make my magazine portray the genre successfully.

These are my targets for my second draft of my double page spread.

• Make it clear that it is his top 10 pieces advice in the stand first
• Make the silhouette photo bigger and more dominant and make an inset out of the bench one
• Make the numbers in the article bigger and different colours to stand out
• Change the colour of the standfirst for colour blind readers.
• Make the page numbers further into the magazine (page 12-13)
• Give credits to the photographer
• Need to add another quote to make it more conventional
• Put a caption with my image and inset
• extend the kerning to make the headline fit around the staples otherwise it won’t work in the magazine
• Change the sans serif font to make it easier to read.