This is the first draft of my double page spread. I am trying to embody the jazz genre in this double page spread for my magazine and I chose different features and conventions to make my magazine portray the genre successfully.
These are my targets for my second draft of my double page spread.
- Make it clear that it is his top 10 pieces advice in the stand first
- Make the silhouette photo bigger and more dominant and make an inset out of the bench one
- Make the numbers in the article bigger and different colours to stand out
- Change the colour of the standfirst for colour blind readers.
- Make the page numbers further into the magazine (page 12-13)
- Give credits to the photographer
- Need to add another quote to make it more conventional
- Put a caption with my image and inset
- extend the kerning to make the headline fit around the staples otherwise it won’t work in the magazine
- Change the sans serif font to make it easier to read.