These are my improved 3 pages of my magazine, they have been improved with the feedback I got given on my Screencastify.

Whats Changed?

Front Cover:

• I have only one inset image on my front cover now with a border around it so it looks more professional.
• I have gotten ridden of some of the text that was next to my models head and made my main cover star bigger.
• At the bottom where it includes what artists will be in the magazine, I put a slash in between so it is easier to read.

Contents Page

• I have changed the font of the title so it isn’t the same as the front cover and I have put the logo of the magazine beside it.
• I got rid of some of the articles and made the boxes all the same size so it doesn’t look odd with different shaped boxes as that doesn’t look professional.
• I have put page numbers on the inset images so the reader can easily find what page to go to find these images.

Double Page Spread

• I have changed the background colour as usually a DPS wouldn’t be printed in black because of the cost.
• I have made the text boxes the same size and only used one drop capital.
• I changed minor things such as the page number being cut off at the bottom.