This is my draft feature article. I have read through it and I found some mistakes myself but I have not created a voice memo. Although it reads well and is overall a good article I made a number of mistakes which made the flow of the article not make sense and I also made some capitol letter and punctuation mistakes.

My teacher gave me feedback and these are the things I need to correct and change:

• Correct stars over censored words
• Add more context
• Is quite brief so needs a bit more
• Swap order and put the bio before the tips
• Fix caps
• Needs intro/ change order
• Make it clear which band member is saying the tips.