I asked for some feedback on my first draft of my double-page spread from my peers and my teacher.

Here is the feedback from my peers:

Here is my teacher’s feedback:

• move the photo in more and find one with eyes looking up
• move the text on the right in – very close to edge
• centre bottom quote
• change to ‘Article By:’
• add another pull quote in a shape
• lower transparency of shapes
• get rid of second drop capital
• make headline different – change font?
• change transparency of photo to fit with shape theme?

What I need to do now:

• change the photo
• move the text
• centre bottom quote
• lower transparency of shapes and image
• change headline font