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What I changed:

• changed the main photo so there was eye contact with the audience
• moved the right hand side text so it wasn’t so close to the edge
• centred the bottom quote
• added another image of my artist behind the text so it links both sides of the page together
• lowered transparency of images and shapes
• changed text to ‘Article By:’

What I need to do next:

• change the transparency of the ” to fit in with the theme
• change the headline font to make it stand out more or change the wording to make it more interesting
• experiment with the images to make different aspects stand out
• get rid of second drop capital
• add another pull quote