Feedback from 1st draft of DPS
Some feedback that I received for my first draft of my double page spread was:
- Good photo, but enlarge it a bit more
- Framing of photo good
- Move the quote to break up the article
- Good typeface for article title
- Stand first too long
- Different body font
Targets for Next Draft
- Enlarge photo a bit more
- Move quote onto body text
- Shorten standfirst
- Change body font