This is the second draft of my Contents Page. I also used InDesign to work on this. I tried to listen to my teachers and peers reviews so that I could use them to edit it so that it would be as best as possible.

What is New:

• I changed the graphics to make them my own
• I changed the headline so it wasn’t so busy
• I replaced the insets with my own images
• I changed fonts to make it less messy and easily readable
• I made the border around the insets bolder so that it stood out more

My Targets:

• Add more graphics to make it look more professional
• Include some other colours
• Make the headline bolder
• Add some drop shadow
• Possibly change font
• Add more cover lines and change fonts and colours of key words so they stand out more
• Check proportions of photos