This is the second draft of my double page spread. I created it on indesign. When editing it I considered my peers reviews and things I could have improved on when I made my first draft.
What is New:
- I edited my images used slightly
- I wrote who the article is by and who the photographer was
- I added page numbers
- I edited the headline slightly to make it stand out more
- I changed the colour of the inset
- I added an additional quote inside of the inset
My Targets:
- Add my own article
- When the text is in, make it look more interesting, e.g include colour
- Caption the inset
- Possibly include a couple more graphics
- Change the font of the text and quotes
- Add a banner in the bottom corner explaining tour dates