These are the drafts threes of my three magazine pages. I used photoshop and InDesign to make my drafts look as professional as possible.
Front Cover
What’s new:
- I changed the brightness of my image so that it is easier to look at
- I added the date and price of my magazine
- I moved the vertical cover line further up
- I added an additional cover line
- I included the name of an actual EDM artist
- I justified my cover lines
What’s next:
- Change the font of EDM in the cover line
- Add a question mark on who is Rezz
- Make the masthead stand out more
- Change we are to we’re in cover line
- Raise Izzy EDM queen and add more information
Contents Page
What’s new:
- I added more graphics
- I added more colour
- I made the headline bolder and changed the colour of the end
- I changed the font of my text to make it look more electric
- I changed the size and colour of key words in my cover lines to make it pop more
- I changed proportions of photos
What’s next:
- Make sure no images are stretched
- Add more colour in the text
- Add & instead of and
- Add more information and twitter and Instagram handles
Double Page Spread
What’s new:
- I have added my own article
- I added an additional graphic
- I changed the font of quotes that I have put next to photos
- I have included the tour dates in the bottom left hand corner
What’s next:
- Add a title for tour dates
- Make sure pages numbers are the same fonts
- Add strike on headline
- Add another quote
This screencastify outlines all of my targets for my final draft: