This is the second draft of our music video.

I chose this music video because it was quite similar to the style of our video. This is because they created a similar style of the music video to ours. For example using similar locations, lighting and our storyline is quite similar.

What they did well –

• They used a variety of shots and distances
• The videos were cut well with good transitions
• The narrative is clear and interesting

How we could improve our music video –

• We need to make the narrative more clear
• We need to use more shots and angles to make our music video more interesting
• We need to use more transitions because we use the same ones quite often
• We need to make sure that our lipsyncing is always in time with the music
• We need to make sure we are always considering mise en scene