This is the screen castify that our media teacher created to give us feedback on our second draft of our music better. She communicated to us what went well and what could be better.

What Went Well – 

• We edited to the beat well
• We have some good close up shots of the performance section of our video
• We created emotion well throughout our shots.

Targets For Next Time –

• We need to make sure that the lip-syncing is in time with the correct lyrics.
• We need to make sure that shots don’t drag on and we need a variety of shots.
• We need to use a variety of transitions instead of using the same ones over and over again.
• We need to make sure that we do not include clips where characters are breaking the fourth wall.