This is the second draft of my digipak. I have added two additional panes, changed the font used, added additional colour and edited my photos in photoshop.

This is the Screen Castify that my teacher created where she tells me what she likes about my second draft and what I could do to make it better.

Feedback For My Next Draft –

• I need to change the font I have used throughout the digipak
• Make the chains sharper and brighter using photoshop
• Add speech marks around lyrics and make them smaller
• Add more lyrics on my inside pane
• Make the disco ball pop in photoshop
• Replace the name on the spines

After watching the digipak it is clear that I can develop my digipak further so that I can achieve a higher grade. I agree with all of my teacher’s points and I will use them going forward onto my third draft.