This is the second draft of my double page spread. I created it on indesign. When editing it I considered my peers reviews and things I could have improved on when I made my first draft.

What is New:

• I edited my images used slightly
• I wrote who the article is by and who the photographer was
• I added page numbers
• I edited the headline slightly to make it stand out more
• I changed the colour of the inset
• I added an additional quote inside of the inset

My Targets:

• Add my own article
• When the text is in, make it look more interesting, e.g include colour
• Caption the inset
• Possibly include a couple more graphics
• Change the font of the text and quotes
• Add a banner in the bottom corner explaining tour dates