This is the second draft of our music video.
I chose this music video because it was quite similar to the style of our video. This is because they created a similar style of the music video to ours. For example using similar locations, lighting and our storyline is quite similar.
What they did well –
- They used a variety of shots and distances
- The videos were cut well with good transitions
- The narrative is clear and interesting
How we could improve our music video –
- We need to make the narrative more clear
- We need to use more shots and angles to make our music video more interesting
- We need to use more transitions because we use the same ones quite often
- We need to make sure that our lipsyncing is always in time with the music
- We need to make sure we are always considering mise en scene