Here is my teachers feedback of the second draft of my music video, overall my teacher said that she liked the majority of our narrative shots but there is room for a lot of improvement in order to make the music video to the best of our ability.

Positives:

• Good shots of toys in studio
• The shots of putting the costume on are effective

Things which need improving:

• More close ups of toys, and a more creative variety
• More spaceman shots, with brighter lighting and make the spaceman clips appear earlier
• Re-record performance and create more intimacy and movement, also try a better setting