Shown above is out pitch for our music video, the slideshow shows the song we are using, the underlying themes, the narrative and performance,and Mis-en-scene. During our spoken pitch to our teacher we received 6 positive comments and 6 feedback comments. These included:
Positive
- Interesting concept and narrative
- Good use of setting
- Narrative and performance are combined
- Will show good editing skills
- Well known band, but a not so much a popular song
Targets
- Another actor or two could add more to the narrative
- Need more detail on props that will be used
- Mis-en-scene needs to be worked on more
- Finalize choice of set
- Good close up shots of the toys are needed to keep interest
- Decide on costume design
From this feedback we will take the targets into consideration and address them, after reflecting we will finalize choice of set, costume design and mis-en-scene. We also need to think about developing the narrative more whether that be with adding a new actor or with detail such as props and ideas of angles. This will help when coming to filming and developing our music video.