DPS Second Draft

For the second draft of my double page spread I have improved the cut-out of the model. I made the headline smaller so it fit on one page and didn’t cross over the stapling area. I then made the quote smaller so that the headline was still the biggest text on the page. I removed the hyphenation from the article and improved the text wrap.

Targets for final draft:

• Make him bigger and over the background so that he goes over the background at the top more i.e. overlaps the black onto the white more.
• Make the columns more interesting, colours, quotes, etc by adding some design graphics? a Guitar logo opaque in the background behind the copy?
• Fix text wrap under the fretboard needs aligning better.
• Could the page numbers be in a colour?