For this task, we had to present our music video ideas to three teachers (Mrs Cobb, Miss Hales and Mr Gregson). After presenting our narrative and performance ideas, our teachers then began to give us feedback on these thoughts. They suggested that we perhaps change the performer who we chose for our dancing scenes, this is because they believed we needed someone who specialised in more contemporary dance. Moreover, they felt this would look a lot better with out video. Furthermore, they also suggested that we use Fort Richmond instead of  the Guernsey Underground Hospital as this would be a lot easier to light. From this, I learnt just how important it is to have an external perspective on our ideas, this will allow our video to be a lot better and therefore we can make it as good as possible.