https://youtu.be/oq33YMzLSiA

Above is a video of our draft 1, we uploaded this to YouTube in order to gain some feedback which we can use to help improve our music video. This is simply a very rough idea of how we would like our music video to look and therefore you can clearly see where there are shots missing and areas that definitely need to be improved. We can also see from this that a large portion of our narrative is missing and therefore this will be added in our next draft.

From this task, we hope to gain a large portion of critical feedback so we can improve our music video. We will use all the feedback we receive to change our music video to make it a lot more visually appealing.