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We believed it would be appropriate to collect written criticism of our advert at this stage. Therefore, we thought that receiving this from our peers would work out to be the best option in this situation. Some of the questions that the form asked the individual to answer we things like; whether the shots were well composed, if ICT had been skillfully used and if photoshop actually helps to enhance the pictures. Moreover, we also felt this would be a good way to gather feedback on our first draft, as it was a clear and simple way to evaluate whether or not we has met the criteria necessary to make a good product. Due to this, once again we requested that our peers filled the form in to the best of their ability. This was in order for us to achieve and receive the criticism necessary to continue to move our product forward.

From this task, we are now much more aware of how important it is to gather constructive criticism throughout the production stage. This is due to the fact, that it will most definitely ensure that we know the conventions that do not really work and those which make the advert look even more professional. Therefore this will help to improve the product before we eventually decide to finalise it.

Targets:

• Ensure that all of the text is visible, so it can be easily read on the advert.
• Edit the image more, perhaps experiment with more colour correction to improve the visual look of the image.
• Make sure to improve the quality of the advert as a whole to gain a much more professional look.