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After publishing our first music video draft to youtube, we started to receive a few constructive comments. Elements that seemed to work well and factors that need to be improved were discussed in a few of the comments and therefore this will help us in the production process of our video. We were critically assessed on the work we had completed so far and so, the work we go on to do next will be dramatically improved; ensuring our next draft will be a lot better than the first. In total we had three separate Youtube moments, all of which we will take into consideration when taking our media product further into production.

From this, I leant just how important it is to gather feedback from your audience. They are the people your products aimed at and therefore it is most definitely important to gather information about their opinions, as this is what really matters. By taking on this feedback, we will be able to make the necessary changes and create a product that really appeals to our target audience. The targets we have taken from this feedback task is:

• Refilm the performer section of the music video, as in laces it is clear he is unsure of the word and therefore almost mumbles.
• The pace of edit also needs to be improved on in places. At points there seems to be a slow, met boring edit to beat and this quickly become unappealing to the viewer.
• Overall, add more content. Perhaps a wider range of narrative shots, this will make the video as a whole more appealing to watch. With the use of more footage, the video will appear more substantial and so the viewer will immediately be much more inclined to enjoy watching the product.