Here are my third drafts of my magazine and as you can see, I have made more big changes. I have given the cover lines red regal typeface titles to make them look more dramatic and theatrical, as well as stretching the Orbit title out a bit more to make it look less squished and more like an important title.

I also made the plug yellow to add to the colour scheme and make it stand out more. I centred the main cover line to demonstrate its importance and how it links to the main cover star. I introduced my pug in the form of a torn page as I think that shows off my editing has improved and also fits the vibe of the magazine better than a simple plain circle.

With my contents page, I decided I did not need to have Orbit in as it took away from the fact it was the contents page. I decided to change the typeface of the contents coverlines and made them look more professional, giving each an introduction followed by a small description of what to expect on each page. I also decided to make a film reel and put my model in it to make it look more professionally edited and add some fun to my page. I added a small pug so that fans knew where to find this exciting-looking model. Finally, i just trimmed out the white wall above the models bed so that it fit better into the picture.

For my dps, I just added in my actual interview, colour scheming the questions and answers into black and red. I also switched all the words at the top. so that the artists name was at the right which is a lot more common in magazines. I also changed the colour of my fonts and made Q&A and Orbit the same size so that neither distracted more than the other.

Click on the link below to watch my teacher screencastify feedback.

From looking at my teachers feedback, I now understand that I have to make a few changes such as taking away the grain filter on my front cover to make the image look more high quality, and sort out the arrangements of my words as things like line spacing are a bit off.