Here, we have filmed in a new setting to create a more familiar vibe to the music video, as well as link to the movie ‘Jennifer’s Body’ that this song is linked to.

After completing draft 3, e asked some of our peers to critique our work and tell us what went well, but also if they had any targets for us.

Peer Feedback:

• A large range of shots.
• The lighting helps enforce the narrative.
• Edit to the beat is done well and makes the video more intense and atmospheric.
• Good use of Mise en Scene to capture the genre.
• Wide range of location shoots that match the vibe.

Peer Targets:

• Clean up the edit to beat.
• Get more more angles in as a lot are straight on.
• The black screen at the beginning needs to be filled in.
• Maybe make the lip syncing a bit cleaner.
• Make some of the clips brighter as some are quite dark.

In conclusion, we still have some work to do, but a lot of it is just cleaning up rough edges. There is some things I want to improve on and gaps I want to fill, as well as some extra scenes that need filming.