This is our teachers feedback on our second draft.

Teachers Feedback:

• Watch ‘Not I’ music video by Samuel Becket to inspoire us for the first dialogue scene.
• Edit to the beat – will make the video more energetic and is more conventional of music videos.
• In doing so, cut the clips up and spread them out more.
• Scale and position some clips so that they are less centred mid shots and can be more to the side or close up.
• Film some Point Of Views to make the video more personal and give the audience a greater understanding of the narrative.

Moving forward with this information, we can now go and make new chnages to our music video. Our teachers helpful feedback will guide us futher in post prodcution, but now we can also work on our narrative, like in the introduction diologue scene.