CLICK ON THE ‘DPS 1’ TO SEE THE PDF
Above I have inserted a JPEG and PDF of my first draft of my double page spread. I have used music magazine conventions to in order for my magazine to look realistic but unique. I have made sure my DPS is suitable for my targeted audience but using technical and creative skills throughout the process.
PEER FEEDBACK:
- Caption the smaller photo
- Change the red writing to a brighter red to read it more easily
- Make the big title bigger
- Change the bottom caption to one side
- insert a transparent text box to caption the small photo
- page numbers don’t work with the number of pages you are doing
- smaller byline
- the headline across the bottom will get lost in the fold
- headline in a different font to the subheadline
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