This is our pitch for our music video.
From this pitch we now have a clear outline of what exactly we need to do and want to do. We have discussed with Miss what needs to be done and have concluded on the following.
6 good ideas:
- Narrative- Our narrative idea is a good backbone to work on with a decent theme.
- Locations – Our locations are ambitious and interesting
- Clothing – Our clothing is relevant and similar to the original band
- Angle ideas – We have some fun shots we want to try
- Full band ideas – Our full band aspect works well in our genre
6 improvements/Targets
- More adventurous Mise-En-Scene – Our costumes are good and relevant to the genre but they can be more eye catching and extreme to convey the tone of the song
- More cohesive narrative idea – Our narrative idea is good but needs more work to be more illustrative to the songs themes.
- Creative shots and angles – We need to ensure that lots of our shots are interesting and use adequate transitions and more to fully convey the genre and star image to our consumers.
- Different lighting – We can use different lighting ideas to increase the atmospheric feel of the video and use things like red lights to convey the mood and themes of the lyrics.
- Theme within narrative – We need to remain cohesive between our narrative and performance to some degree.
Overall this pitch was very useful as we have laid out what we want to do and have received adequate feedback which will help us improve our work. This pitch was also good as we now have a slideshow with all our ideas mapped out which will help us keep track of our roster of ideas. If we implement these improvements we can appeal more to our audience and we can stay conventional to our genre. These improvements will also give the video a rewatch able quality and add layers to our video.