This is our draft 3 of our music video.
Here is the feedback I received from my peers.
Pros –
. I really enjoyed the range of shot distances used
. I like the tension that was built up through the video
. The drums, guitar and lip syncing went with the music
Cons –
. I’m not sure about the black and white filter in the performance section. Possibly, instead you could use a filter with a dark concentration on it.
. The shot of the baby becoming blurred is slightly shaky and I think it may need to be replaced.
. I think you need more of a variety of shots whilst lip syncing.
Overall, it is really great and looks very professional.
I am glad to see that some of the things we edited have been noted in our peers reflection. Some of the things we changed from draft 2 to 3 are.
- Got rid of some of the grainy shots as they are only used once in the video and it is not consistent.
- Made some continuity edits, mainly singing.
- Improved syncing in general.
- We pushed back some scenes to establish the boy and girl better.
The feedback we have received has further improved our outlook and has given us more suggestions and ideas for our final draft. Our feedback indicates that we have a solid video which could be improved with a few more tweaks which is good because it means our work so far has been improving with every draft.