We have feedback from our first draft from our teachers and our peers in the form of comment on the music video. This will help us to edit our music video in order to create an improved second draft.

After looking at this feedback we have made a list of the improvements we will make going forward.

• Add more close ups of the lead singer which break the forth wall as it makes a more powerful connection with the audience
• Use colour correction so that the lighting is the same throughout and the shots are clearer
• Look over the shots of the other band members to make sure they are playing in time with the music
• When filming our narrative use a contrasting location to our performance in order to keep the music video varied and interesting