In response to the feedback I received, I have followed these ideas and proceeded to correct them, creating the below results of which I am generally very happy with.
From this, the only further alterations that could be made have been highlighted as the following;
- Make the album covers slightly larger
- Decrease the line spacing in the cover line captions
- Further angle the signatures on the photo
- Change the “and” in the photo caption to “&”
As well as this, it was also commented that on the contents page the colour pink seems quite dominant, however in experimenting with changing some areas I only found that this gave the page a muddy feel that I didn’t like so have decided to leave it as it is.