This is my first draft of my 2-page spread!

I need to think of a title and I also need to cut out my photo of Dave and place it on a nice background, or I will change the photo completely and adapt my story around it.

These are my targets set my, my teacher;

• Get rid of hyphens
• Choose a sans serif font
•  Paragraph the article
• Break it up with quotes or photos
• Drop capital – needs changing.
• No page number
• No date.