Today i gathered, feedback from my peers.

Will said,

• He wanted some patterns on the background at the top on the left page.
• He would like the paragraphs to be the same length.

Mrs Cobb said,

• Get rid of hyphens
• Choose a sons serif font
•  Paragraph the article
• Break it up with quotes or photos
• Drop capital – needs changing.
• No page number
• No date.