Today i gathered, feedback from my peers.
Will said,
- He wanted some patterns on the background at the top on the left page.
- He would like the paragraphs to be the same length.
Mrs Cobb said,
- Get rid of hyphens
- Choose a sons serif font
- Paragraph the article
- Break it up with quotes or photos
- Drop capital – needs changing.
- No page number
- No date.