Here is the second draft for my music video:

What went well:

• We filmed many different complex shots
• We put all the clips together
• The clips were too the beat of the music
• We added special effects to the clips

Even better if:

• We made sure we dressed our star in the same things all the time
• We added more transitions
• We added more effects to the clips
• We could add more snappy fitting clips

Targets:

• edit more
• more fast paced edits
• transitions between clips
• more effects