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Every magazine needs to have at least one double page spread. These double pages are not always done in one attempt though. The magzine creators will need to do one, two, or even three drafts before they find a design that they like. I have designed my first draft which I have included below. Currently, the paragraphs are filled with placeholder text as I have not yet written my article.
For my double page spread, there are some parts that I like and some parts that I don’t like.
What I like:
– The style of the image fits the genre of pop well because it is happy and fun.
– I like how I have added lens flare in photoshop so it looks more like the model is sat in the clouds.
What I don’t like:
– The image of the model is blurry and it is very hard to remove this blur on photoshop.
– the image of the model does not match the image in the background on the bottom of the double page spread
Targets:
– If I was to re-shoot this image, I would make sure that the model was ion focus before taking the photo.
– In my next draft, I will make sure that the image of the model matches the image in the background better.