This is the second draft of our music video. This draft includes narrative and performance but it has not been perfected yet, we are missing close ups and some of the shots are too long or short. We need to address these problems for our next few drafts of our video. This draft does also not include any effects which we may wish to add. This is just the video with narrative and performance, nothing else has been done to it at this point.

Targets for improvement:

– Add any effect which we may wish to add.

– Take some more close up shots and add them to the video.

– Adjust the length of some of the shots so they are not too long or too short.