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This is my second draft of my front over. You can clearly see I have spent more time editing and added effects to gain attraction towards my magazine.

Whats new/changed?

• I have added a neon affect around her gilet to emphasize the image and catch peoples eyes
• I have changed the colour of her name so that it is clearer to see
• I have added a price in the bottom left hand corner
• I have decreased the size of the barcode so that it isn’t overpowering
• I chose to move the headings to the right as it meant my models arm dint look cut off and it now looks like it is just going off frame
• I made my model bigger so it proves she is the star

Things I need to improve;

• Add some effects in the background to fill the dark spaces
• Do something with the title/ make it stand out more
• Look at putting a border around the headings so there clearer