Screen Castify

Now that I have submitted my draft 3 magazine, I must now get some feedback from my teacher, bellow is a short video which outlines the pros and cons of my third draft.

What’s new?

Front cover

• Added special effects to front cover photo
• Made a banner for front cover
• Moved the features out of the way of the model
• Changed the colour of the Model’s name
• Changed the colour of the plug text box to a red and cyan mix

Contents page

• Added similar special effects to and contents page photo
• Rearranged cover lines
• Added a red and cyan mixed background

DPS

• Changed colours of text in DPS
• Cropped out photo of other model since the article wasn’t about her
• Added in another photo with the article

What’s next? (based off screen castify)

Front cover

• ensure that top plug is not cut off.
• Issue number
• Make it ‘funky’ and ‘full of stuff’
• Add something to the cover star’s name
• More coverlines
• Make main star bigger
• Consider smaller boxes for the features
• Move DPS article title away from cover star

Contents Page

• More coverlines
• Make titles of cover lines in bold and capital, and make the descriptions in lowercase.
• Stick to a pattern with page numbers
• Ensure that cover lines are all the same size
• Page number
• Different image to avoid repetition

DPS

• Feels like it’s from a different magazine
• Consider different font for article
• Crop the shoulder from the photo
• Aline the starting text columns
• Play with the photos like done with front cover.