Draft of the Double Page Spread

My Double Page Spread first draft:

Improvements to make:

• Move pull quote.
• Can’t have black text on the railing.
• Center text.
• Space out the colour, so I have bits of red all over the DPS.

My Double Page Spread after making some changes:

• I’ve added the red bar at the bottom to spread out the colour a little bit more because it was all clumped into one area.
• I’ve moved my black text away from the railing that it was on before, when the text was on the railing it was barely readable.
• I’ve moved my pull quote down to beneath the first columns, I have done this because where the pull quote was before it made the quote look like a title instead.